2000 years from now, when earth is experiencing the apocalypse and humans are being hunted to extinction. Everything changed…
“Price, we’re going down,” Screamed Capt. John over the sound of the carnage. “Turn on the turbo then, I’m not going to die yet. Head for that deserted planet, it’s our only chance,” Capt. Price shouted back. Pushing through the earth’s barrier, the plane was reduced to mere ashes. It was only because of quick thinking John that the two captains survived; he had grabbed the parachutes and handed one to Price. Unfortunately, they crashed into an abandoned building. Clearing the debris, they looked around their new home…
Amberley Y6 
fab work kieren very good work
Oh, I loved this! Kieren this story was so exciting and creative. I really liked how you set up the whole plot with your first sentence. Also, the dialogue was great! I can not wait to read more stories from you and your classmates.