Here is wiggly woo the worm who has a magical life deep under the ground. He has never seen the beautiful outdoors because of the birds blocking all the entrances and exits. If any of us dared to try there would be no return. I decided to do some drastic work to build a rocket to PUSH THROUGH THE EARTHS ATMESHERE this would take a lot of worms! This would be fabulous, fabulous because us worms would be treated fairly. “Keep going worms it’s nearly take of time!”Said wiggly woo, whilst pressing the launch button 5 4 3 2 1 BLAST OFF!
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Amberley Y6 
Well done finlay, great Ad, Same ad sentence keep up the great work
Hi Finlay,
This is a very imaginative story – I wouldn’t have been able to think of something this creative! The way you have described the outdoors and that an action was ‘drastic’ – this suggests it was very important!
I was a little confused though – you used a mixture of first (I) and third person (they, the worms…) – make sure you check 🙂
Great work,
Mr Connor
Team 100wc
Derby, UK