“What is this?” asked Lilly .She crawled through the branches of the den to a mysterious box. Pushing through the earth, Lilly dug up the strange item and carried it inside. She carefully laid it on the kitchen table and took a peek inside. “WOW,” shouted Lilly “Dad? Have you seen this?” It was a time capsule from WW2.It had many old things in like a gasmask, pantomime tickets and a ration book. Lilly ran straight upstairs to tell her Mam about her amazing find. “What are you going to do with the box?” asked her Mam. “Maybe I could…
Amberley Y6 
Well done Holly, I loved reading this extract today. I liked the way you used speech and action to move the story along and the prompt was really well used. I wonder what you would do with the box? It would be fabulous if the items in the box could keep taking you on different adventures. Keep the great writing going!