Their once was a CROCODILE named Beatrice ! Beatrice isn’t any normal crocodile… She was friendly ,she has a SOFT toy and likes ORANGE juice and Likes PEPPER once she FOGOT a present for her best crocodile friend and all because her her memory wasn’t the absolute best ! That night she wept and wept until she cried herself to sleep ! The next morning she staid in her cave all day ! At the night she invited her friend over to sleep and have a midnight feast !
What lovely ideas, Charlotte – and ‘wept’ is a great word to use! Exclamation marks are really good but I always try not to use too many of them.