Once upon a time, there was a man that looked a bit like an egg. He was not just an ordinary egg he was a clumsy egg. One day he sat on a wall which was quite high the egg fell off and cracked a little bit. “AAH!” screamed Humpty I don’t want to be going to a frying pan and be eaten “Please no help me.” Humpty Dumpty got sent to the hospital immediately after half an hour on the floor. Humpty got out of hospital because he was not seriously damaged. A week later he became a scrambled egg.
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Amberley Y6 
well done rik! from ben m
I feel quite sorry for Humpty after this story 🙂 Fantastic adaption of the story though and very imaginative too. Maybe think about how you can use clever commas to help the flow of your story.
Nicki W – 100wc Team 2