Once upon a time, there was a little, plump egg. His name was Humpty Dumpty. One day, he was sitting on a tall, brick wall singing to himself ‘Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall, Humpty Dumpty had a great…’SMASH! Oh No. Humpty Dumpty had fallen off the wall and had cracked. All the kings’ horses and all the kings’ men went racing over the hill. “Oho” exclaimed the Chief “What can we do?” Then one of them had an idea. They fixed Humpty Dumpty and finished the song ‘All the Kings army and horse super glued Humpty together again.
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Amberley Y6 
I love how you took a nursery rhyme instead of a fairy story Holly, it was very clever of you. The twist you put in at the end certainly changed the story of Humpty Dumpty. I was especially impressed by your use of punctuation, especially apostrophes. They can be tricky things!
Keep up the great writing.