Once upon a time there were three little pigs with no home because they were naughty all of the time. The mother and father were sick of them so unfortunately for them they got kicked out. They went out for days to find a spot to build their house. Firstly the pig thats called John found a house and build it out of straw it took him hours the second pig ,who was called Frank, made it out of sticks and the smart one called Ashley build his out of bricks. Unfortunately a wolf came along to borrow some sugar sneezed and all the pigs hard work was gone.
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Amberley Y6 
Oh I love the twist on this story Amberley! Also the way you’ve given them ordinary names, and described Ashley’s character really makes it different. You need to tidy it up with some capital letters and full stops, but your use of commas is excellent!