Once a upon a time there was a there was a egg who had not been washed in 3 years and one day all the kings horses and all the kings men told him if he did not get washed they would eat him as scrambled egg with bacon so the next day humpty dumpty was still on his wall and said I’ve been washed but he had went in the garbage to get washed and the kings men said we will have to eat you so humpty said come and get me but the guards were too small.
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Amberley Y6 
Good writing keep it up.
Benr from your class.
Hello Mitchell. I enjoyed reading your entry. I like how you turned a nursery rhyme into a short story. Some great ideas. The only thing I struggled with a little was when I was reading, there were no places for me to take a breath! Don’t forget to check your work and make sure you have used full stops. You don’t want your readers turning blue! Keep up the great writing.