Once upon a time there was a little girl called little red riding hood and she was going to her grandmars. When she got there she noticed that her grandmar was a lot taller then usual. Oh grandmar what wonderfull ears you have. All the better to smell you with my dear. what a wonderfull nose you have grandmar . All the better to smell you dear. Oh and grandmar what wonderfull teeth you have all the better to eat your wonderfull cake with dear. red riding hood went into a cupboard and found her grandmar there the wolf just wanted some cake
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Amberley Y6 
I like the way you changed the ending and I also liked the way you put noticed.Your story would be a bit good if you put some openers
Hey Dylan
I like the way your story wasn’t as scary as the real one. Don’t forget to use capital letters for Proper Nouns like Little Red Riding-hood. I like the way this wasn’t a complete alteration of the story, you retained enough of the original story. Grandma doesn’t have an ‘r’ on the end and wonderful only has one ‘l’. All in all a good response to this week’s prompt, well done.