There was once a girl called snow white who had many friends which were 7 dwarfs. But one night when snow white was asleep there was a creek at the door when a dark man came in opened his bag and pulled out a bright red Rosie apple. He placed it in her mouth but as she moved she took a big bite out of the apple the big man quietly moved out the door. The next morning all 7 dwarfs went in her room to wake her up. They tried and tried but she wouldn’t wake up. They thought what had happened?
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Amberley Y6 
Hello Ava,
Snow White and the seven dwarfs is one of my favourite fairy tales. You have used some lovely ideas. Just check again and make sure you have used capital letters for the names of people in your writing.
Ms R. Orr
Head Teacher
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