Pushing through the earth’s atmosphere in a rocket, I was finally on my way to space. I am soon going to be the second person on the moon. I can’t wait to put the British flag on the moon. I could see all the planets it was amazing it was like a dream all over again I turned my rocket to land on the moon I could see the flag Neil Armstrong inserted on the moon. I put my space suit on and my helmet to help me breath. I opened the door and floated on to the moon.
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Amberley Y6 
Nice work but be careful one of your sentences goes on for to long keep writing.
Hi Mitchell,
I really enjoyed reading your submission for this weeks 100 Word Challenge.
I especially enjoyed how your story connected to actual events such as the first moon landing. An excellent piece of creative writing, keep up the great work!
Best wishes,
Saran (Team 100).