Dear diary,
Another boring day in the house, my mum was going to work as well as my dad. My dad asked me if I wanted to go to his work. I said yes as I had nothing else to do. My dad worked next to the volcanoes; to be honest I was pretty excited. As I got out the car I spotted some bright orange larva coming out of the volcano, pushing through the earth. I quickly jumped back into the car and screamed at my dad to warn him. We quickly drove away as the larva dribbled down the sides of the volcano…
Amberley Y6 
Wow Abbie great work I love your diary entry keep it up!
Super challenge Abbie you made me feel as if I was near the volcano with the words you have used to describe it.