it was a beautiful day in France and particularly busy day on the bridge called the bridge.the clouds were as fluffy as a kitten,the sky was a deep shade of light blue.theres lots to do on “the bridge”like fishing like pros,relaxing silently, or even jumping of the bridge!but if you thought lake was a good idea you’d be a bit silly because there are lots of little fish that like to nibble your toes!but maybe you can go someday.
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Amberley Y6 
Hi Joe. Nice work. I like the way you have tried to include extra details to set the scene, such as the description of the clouds and the sky. Well done on using a capital letter for a country . . .but you missed out on a lot of others! Don’t be in such a rush to post your writing, take some time to check the capitals! Mr Mullard Team 100 WC UK