I wandered along the wonders of the bridge, the crystal clear water shimmered in the beams of sunlight. The green grass glistened like emerald gems, making this beautiful atmosphere an experience I never wanted to forget. The heat was breathtaking and I glanced longingly over the edge, wanting the cool water so badly. I was sweltering hot, dehydrated and not thinking about where I was going, what I was doing. I began to daydream and I never noticed it happening. The banging and crashing didn’t wake me. I got back to my senses as the boat drifted away, only leaving half of the bridge behind… It’s been like that ever since.
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Amberley Y6 
Hi Emily
What a beautifully descriptive piece of writing. I can see how hard you have had to work to try to select the right words to create the right atmosphere and feeling.
Super writing!
Miss T team 100wc
A lovely piece of writing Emily, it seems like you’ve had a lot of practice. I absolutely loved your ending sentence.