Ellie’s 100 WC week 3

Ambling along the cobbled bridge, I saw the crystal blue river glistening in the sunlight it felt magical.The sun was sizzling like mad, I was exhausted and I was bursting for a cold, fresh glass of water.I looked down over the edge of the bridge and I thought to myself is this the end? Will I die? I didn’t want to think about it.I thought I was day- dreaming, the heat was shining bright on my face and my face was dripping of sweat I couldn’t stand it!The ground started to rumble this was the end!

One thought on “Ellie’s 100 WC week 3

  1. Amberly,
    I love all the sensory detail. I feel like I was right there i the experience. I also appreciated the thought-shot that shows what was going through your mind.

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