Chester go’s to France by Charlotte M

It was a lovely sunny day in France
“Ho Chester, what do you want to do to day lad?” Asked Judd
“Whawha” answered Chester
“Avignon? Ok then Chester lad” said Judd
So they went. They came across a lovely ancient bridge in Avignon the beautiful bridge was designed to look like it had broken in half, Chester wanted to go for a swim in the gorgeous sparkling river on his new floater.

2 thoughts on “Chester go’s to France by Charlotte M”

  2. Hello Charlotte,

    Thank you for sharing your writing this week. I appreciated that you used dialogue in your story. It really does help bring your audience closer to the characters. In addition, I thought adjectives such as “ancient” and “sparkling” were particularly good choices.

    Remember to tuck a comma between quotation marks and the word “said” if there is no ending punctuation inside the quotation mark.

    Keep up your writing!

    Tracey
    Team 100WC
    San José, California, US

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