Quickly the vans raced to the bridge where the bomb was ticking with petrified people trapped on it . The terrorist hidden within them . The snipers loaded ready to shoot the terrorist . The terrorist shot at them and one of the CIA was inured . The CIA sent the rescue the trapped people on the bridge and arrest the terrorist .
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Amberley Y6 
Hi Bryan,
This story is a bit short on words. You’ve only written 65 instead of 100. Those extra 35 words would have been useful for filling out the plot a little as it’s a bit bare.
Next week, try and write a full 100 words for the 100WC and let your imagination fly!
Sarah Team 100WC
Montpellier, France